Suggestion to all writers

I have been reading these storys for about 2 years. All of the writers are pretty decent at it for the most part. The only thing I would suggest is something that gets on my nerves when reading a story. Some of you seem to think that having a 19 year old guy or girl totally stupid about sex is some sort of turn on. Its more annoying than anything. I mean come on, any male or female around 16 years old and some younger know more about sex than some of you writting these storys. Its ridiculous to have a 19 yr old male not know what a pussy is. Or a 19 yr old female not know what it means to cum. I ask that you as the writer take my suggestion as constructive input and not as an insult to your writting. Some of the storys are great right up to the point the writer puts in something like “she wanted me to make her cum, I didnt know what she was talking about but I didnt want to stop and find out” I mean come on, the kid was 19 years old for fucks sake. Im just asking that the writers take out or at least quit putting in those kind of stupid lines in there storys. It would make reading them even more enjoyable. Thanks

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  1. nymph77

    true

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  2. YAH!

    What he said, and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Learn to spellcheck! I don’t mind typos, I make some myself, but for the love of GOD PROOFREAD before you post…And quit with the one giant block stories, at least seperate them by paragraph. It’s too hard to whack off and read those at the same time…

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  3. Proper paragraphs and DETAIL help make a story too. Everything he said is right.

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  4. Banjoboy

    Actually, I sorta like the “innocent” stories. I don’t enjoy reading the stories that the author tries to make as dirty as possible. I prefer the “cute” or “innocent” stories much more than the “dick up her ass” stories.

    Just my opinion!!!!

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  5. peeerless527

    Amen!!!!!!!! And how about we suggest they use punvtuation, paragrapgs, etc.

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  6. Ramcharger

    For the record, there are people out there that are older that 19 years old that don’t know the proper anatomy and terminology when it comes to sex. You have to realize that there are many different cultures out there and there are many ways in which people are brought up.

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  7. Ramcharger

    Some people are simply brought up without this kind of sexual knowledge. Besides all that, putting this kind of comment on the main board is fine I am sure, but if you want to make an impact, try putting it in the comments section of the story you are reading.

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  8. ice_craze

    My lord…It’s about damn time someone said it! I have read some great stories, but reading on and the 20 year old not knowing some simple stuff that most 10 year olds seem to know just ruins the story. Spell check, proper paragraphs, FL WRDS (full words) would be the icing on the cake) punctuation, all those things would make most stories more enjoyable

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  9. Phantom

    People really do need to wise up. And Ram extremly few people are not brought up without knowing and for those people they most likely have a friend who is a complete slut. But you do have to remember that although you do have to be 18 there are most likely a few 12 year olds writing about stuff they don’t even know about. But I support your protest all the same.

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  10. On behalf of all the literate readers on the site…THANK YOU!!!

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  11. Lioncourt

    Thank you! It’s about time someone said it!

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  12. the stories where they know nothing about sex shoud not include them saying stuff like ohhh he found my clit, and stuff that people having no sexual knowlege shouldnt be there

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  13. BabyCricket

    I try to use proper punctuation and paragraphs, but sometimes I slip a little. Do my stories seem ignorant too? That makes me think a little bit. Can you make a story sexual without a little innocence to it too?

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  14. Wayne Cleveland

    Who the fuck do you think you are? I can’t believe fantasies.com gave you the space to type your opinion. People write what they wanna write because that is how they choose to express themselves.

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  15. mineprivatepersonal

    If you’re going to give advice – learn the difference between cum, come, coming. Cum is a noun that is the name of the juices – come is the action – I’m going to come – I’m coming. I want your cum inside me.

    I would also like to ad advice — white space — long ongoing paragraphs and stories with no breaks is a major turn off – learn to spell – grammar wouldn’t hurt. I’m not perfect, but gee, I stop reading because it’s so bad. I want turned on, not off.

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