Jerry was spending a few days with his old high school buddy, Bill, and his sister, Barbara. Jerry hadn't seen Bill in years, and when he found that he would be in his town on business, he had called to say hello. Bill had insisted that he stay with
Suggestion to all writers
I have been reading these storys for about 2 years. All of the writers are pretty decent at it for the most part. The only thing I would suggest is something that gets on my nerves when reading a story. Some of you seem to think that having a 19 year old guy or girl totally stupid about sex is some sort of turn on. Its more annoying than anything. I mean come on, any male or female around 16 years old and some younger know more about sex than some of you writting these storys. Its ridiculous to have a 19 yr old male not know what a pussy is. Or a 19 yr old female not know what it means to cum. I ask that you as the writer take my suggestion as constructive input and not as an insult to your writting. Some of the storys are great right up to the point the writer puts in something like “she wanted me to make her cum, I didnt know what she was talking about but I didnt want to stop and find out” I mean come on, the kid was 19 years old for fucks sake. Im just asking that the writers take out or at least quit putting in those kind of stupid lines in there storys. It would make reading them even more enjoyable. Thanks