very lucky fan part one

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Very lucky fan

part 1..
Now first let me introduce myself I am Jake a 16 year old kid who is obsessed with a certain Hilary Duff. One day I was listening to the radio and they offered a contest for the 17 caller and that they would win a trip to Hilary Duff’s L.A. home. So I of course was determined to be the 17 caller. So I tried and got the busy signal so if all else fails try again so I did and …..Busy. So I figured I would try once more and it rang!!!!!”Yes” I declared aloud. It rang a couple of more times until I herd the DJ “hey guess what you’re the 17 caller you win!” I was speechless I just about fainted.

The next week was when my flight was scheduled to take of and since it was spring break the airport was jam-packed with people a couple of times I bumped a woman’s ass. Anyway I boarded the flight and sat down and waited. My anticipation was building. As soon as we landed I got off the plane. I went down to the luggage pick up and say my luggage. There wasn’t much but I was able to take it all in one arm. I look for my name on a sign sure enough I saw it he was a tall dark man in a tux. I followed him to a stretch limo. The ride there was quiet. Once we arrived in front of a mason I could see Hilary’s ford SUV. I walked up to the door knocked and Hilary answered. I thought I was going to faint. Hilary greeted me “you must be the winner come in” as I walked in speech less at the house. She directed me to my room which was also huge! I tried to get out a high but I only mumbled. “Dinners at seven you can unpack now” as she left I stole a look at that tight ass in her short tight blue jeans and tight white top. I slowly got myself situated. I stumbled down to dinner with Hilary and Haylie we were having chicken that was very good. Even though Hilary and I were under 21 we had some white wine. It was very good. We eventually moved to the living room. I sat in an armchair Hilary and Haylie sat in the love seat next to each other. We talked for about 2 hours about mine and there lives. Then I decided to go to bed and I walked up to my room and about 1 am Haylie came up and woke me up and said to come downstairs I was to sleepy to notice that she was only in her thong and bra as I walk down stairs and sat on the couch Haylie was on the loveseat with Hilary both in a tee and thongs now. When I finally relized what they were wearing I got very hard. They giggled. “it gets very lonely on the tour bus and we have no guys so we rely on each other you’re the 1st guy we have made contact with for a long time” Haylie said “so we are going have fun with you” giggled Hilary. As Haylie moved over on top of me and removed my dick from my pants. “Oh” she giggled “that’s quite big now do me a favor and pop my sister cherry please” as she moved down to suck my dick it felt so good I though I began to moan slightly then she took my dick out of her mouth and Hilary began to suck me. “you know” I remarked “you are quite good for a 1st timer” as so as I finished my sentence Hilary pulled me onto the floor turning around for a 69 I removed her thong and be gain to lick she moan loudly although baffled by her sucking my dick then as Hilary’s moans got loader she turned around so that my dick gently rubbed her moist cunt as I parted her cunt lips with the head of my dick she moaned but then all at once I jammed it in there breaking her hymn she yelped in pain but I fucked her cunt hard anyways soon she was about to cum and she did all on my did soon after that I came all in her pussy just as we were relaxing I herd Haylie walk in dildo in hand “now its time for some fun” she said…….

To be continued…….

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Tell me if I should continue it of if I just suck as a writer….

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  1. campdaffy

    Continue. You’re a good writer. make sure you have lots of details.

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  2. Priesty,

    Good basis for a story, however, you need to space out your sentances more so we know who is talking and who isn’t.
    Also you have a lot of spelling mistakes, and words in places that don’t make sense.
    When you write the next part try these tips as it will make reading it easier for the reader and it will be easier for you to check it.
    It is a good story and i would encourage you to keep writing.
    Read some of the other stories and see how they are laid out, and you will get a better idea of what i mean.

    Luv
    Priesty xxx.

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  3. thelordfernando

    well franlky ur story sucks…sorrybut u need to be more creative and less imaginative

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  4. evilrome

    i cant wait for the sequel

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  5. evilrome

    i cant wait for the sequel

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  6. fffffff

    you are freakin grosss

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